Summary draft (1)

An online article retrieved from Ministry of Transport 2018 regarding driverless transport in Singapore. This article state that implement of Autonomous Vehicle (AV) will further improve the efficiency of transport which provide better mobility for the commuter.

AV technology is not uncommon in Singapore, having various public transport that is base on this technology, it reduces manpower deployment and enhances the punctuality of public transport.
According to a 2011 MIT study in Singapore, AV-enabled car sharing technology is capable to increase accessibility for commuter through reducing the number of personal vehicles on the roads. This technology helps reduces environmental footprint by improving road management.

Committee on Autonomous Road Transport for Singapore (CARTS) has been established to leads Singapore closer to the achievement for AV-enabled land mobility.


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  1. Unknown20 September 2018 at 21:11

    Hi Ian,

    Here are some pointers:

    - The article title and publication date was not cited properly
    - Paragraphing is not needed in summary writing
    - Words used were the same as in the article

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